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    I've received twenty beatings within the last two weeks, and every time I grow weaker. My eyes are now  vapid and lack the luster they once held. I can only lay in bed, bruised and bleeding.
    I draw everyday, and it seems every piece of art I make I get blood on in.
    He's been slowly killing me for roughly the last 11 of my life. When was I finally going to receive salvation?
    Arthur's eyes were dark now, and they continually swirled. His grin wasn't even there anymore, instead his cute face was twisted with the most raw rage I'd ever seen.
    My (e/c) began to droop, signalling it was time for me to take a nap. I haven't slept on a regular schedule  for about a week.
    I no longer could dream, escape and see his happy face. I could no longer gain comfort from his warm hugs or lovely cupcakes. My dreams were nothing but darkness.
    I remember when we'd meet up and he'd sing me songs, sometimes we'd even bake together. It was only thing that made me smile anymore, and I didn't even have that.
    When I finally awoke the first thing I realized was how warm it was. I grasped the warmth to find it was rather soft, like clothing.
    After a minute of debating I opened my eyes. The clothes, were...Arthur's.
    He looked down at me with a small, comforting smile.
    "So you finally decide to show me?" I managed to choke out in a hoarse voice.
    His face dropped and he rubbed my cheek with his thumb. "I'm sorry I didn't before...."
    I smiled at how sweet he was and rested my hand on top of his.
    He held me close and that's when I saw determination flash through those lovely eyes of his.
    "If he comes tonight....I'll kill him."
    I shocked me. He sounded so angry and protective.
    "I won't let him hurt you again, I promise."
    "I don't doubt it." a smiled made it's way across my bruised face. "I can hear the determined tone in your voice.
    He smiled and was about to rub his nose against mine when we heard the familiar sound of the door slamming shut.
    "______....Come to your door!" a beast like growl roared through the house.
    Swiftly, Arthur picked me up and carried to my closet. He proceeded to gently hide me and make sure I was safe.
    "Don't watch..." he whispered before closing the door.
    Now I was trapped in darkness and my anxiety began to rise. I began calming my breathing and I closed my eyes.
    But when you cut off one sense you heighten another.
    My ears began to pick up sounds of their fight. There was a metallic clang of blades clashing and sometimes the sickening tearing of slicing skin and clothes.
    I didn't mind to here any of that, so I covered my ears.
    Now my sense of smell took over. Did you know that whatever you smell, you are also tasting it? That being said, I don't even want to decide the horrifying smell that overwhelmed my nostrils.
    After some time the closet door opened. Relieved, I dropped my hands and looked up.
    "Sorry for the mess, poppet."
    I shook my head and jumped into his arms. "It's fine, you saved me!"
    He giggled cutely and wrapped his arms around me. "I'd do anything for you.."
    My imagination is a wonderful thing. It keeps me from going insane.
    But it's also painful.
    I slipped from my reverie and found my eyes still glued to the window, watching the snowflakes hypnotic dance.
    A deep pain carved into my chest as I scoffed to myself and looked around.
    My art teacher was giving me a concerned look, like he knew the very daydream that slipped through my mind.
    I guess I have a morbid imagination, or maybe it's just my escape.
    I do endure cruel beatings from a man who is as described before. He's not related to me, and he killed my parents. Now he's slowly killing me.
    Daydreams are my only way of escaping the reality I have.
    But nothing can save me from this hellish nightmare.
    "Is this seat taken?" a shy and familiar voice asked.
    "No, you can sit there." forcing a fake smile, I patted the seat. But when I glanced over at our new student, my eyes nearly popped out of my skull.
    "Thanks, poppet."
    Hm...Maybe I can be saved.
Dear god what did I just write?

To be honest I do daydream realistically, that's how I usually come up with stories. So if I ever were caught in a terrible situation I would not be caught daydreaming of happy things, but actually trapped in a reverie of how to fix everything. So this is based off my imagination and how it helps but also hinders. [the last part is so the reader has hope. my original intent was to leave it at the line "But nothing can save me from this hellish nightmare." ]

Chapter 1: [link]

Chapter 2: [link]

Chapter 3: :iconyay2penglandplz:

story (c) :iconyaoicupcakeluver:

hetalia (c) :iconhimaruyaplz:

Creation of the 2Ps go to their rightful creator

The picture was found on Google Images~

[Also I apologize for it being short...]
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ClockworkAngel6789 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
Dat ending though.....could you possibly consider a sequel? Pleeeaaasssee?
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No sorry, I haven't been writing for a while and I'd prefer to leave this where I originally left it.
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ClockworkAngel6789 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
Okay I understand. :) no worries. Sometimes its better to just leave it as it is. You're a very good writer though.
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for understanding and for the compliment. I've honestly wanted to write more stories, I mean, none of them are Hetalia based, but I've wanted to write nonetheless. I just don't have the time or inspiration to write stories like I used to.
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13th-Program Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Student General Artist
And also, please continue this TTwTT you don't know how much this means to me. You. Are. Awesome!!! XD
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Unfortunately, I can't. I've lost a lot of my inspiration for writing Hetalia stories and also this was the final chapter. I may continue writing but the stories will be more Avengers based. However, I really do appreciate your lovely compliments~ So, thank you~ 
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13th-Program Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Student General Artist
This is so awesome!!! XD I love this! You are a great writer XD
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you~
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Emgoldey Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I really liked this! Great work!
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you~ I'm glad you enjoyed it~
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CrazyHetaliaLover13 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really cute! Thank you~
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem~ Thank you for the compliments and for giving this story a read~ ^-^
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Amazed-Shipper901 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
'But when you cut off one sense you heighten another'
Has someone been watching Doctor Who?
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No, sorry, I just know quite a bit about science. It's a natural thing that happens to almost anything. For instance, I'm partly blind in one eye so, one of my other senses is heightened. 
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Dimonic-Fox666 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! best ending ever~
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you~ I'm glad you enjoyed it~
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Dimonic-Fox666 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i hope the new student Oliver will  kill the man~ 2P england is amazing :D
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You never know my friend~ The ending is pretty open so...yeah~ But I have to agree~ 2P England is amazing~
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Dimonic-Fox666 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:3
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americanlover152 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
I love the ending ~bravo!
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you~ ^-^ I'm glad you enjoyed it~
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americanlover152 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
welcome
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Dipper4561 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
WOW. That was such an amazing story okay. This story is a 12/10 ok. I loved it all, it was beautiful and heartwarming. Your writing is amazing too ok. And that ending<3

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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, thank you! That means so much to me, but most of all, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ 
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detective-blood Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that ending XD
wow
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Did you enjoy it?
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detective-blood Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep! >^<



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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm glad then~ ^-^
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Skye-42 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Student General Artist
YUS!!! I love this.
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it~
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Skye-42 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks for creating it~! :D
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kitty6670 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
xD
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XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll take it that you enjoyed my story~ I'm glad, they're purely meant for entertainment~ ^-^
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XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
 :happybounce: YATAAAAAA~!!!!
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BlackBloodWolf554 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I make happy endings, but someone always has to disappear in my stories!
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yea, I usually don't make happy endings. I originally intended to leave this story at the line: "But nothing can save me from this hellish nightmare." Also, in fact, most of my stories contain the death of a character. I personally have a hard time writing happy endings.
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BlackBloodWolf554 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Don't we all.
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sometimes~
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RedTearRiding Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fangirling so hard >_< :squee: Why can't he come to MY art class?? :iconwhutplz:
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Maybe if you wish hard enough he will~
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RedTearRiding Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icon2penglandderpplz: -wishiiiiiiiiiiiing-
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RedTearRiding Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, and would you mind terribly if I drew up that picture you described with Big Ben? I've been lacking inspiration lately and if not the cure to my block, it would certainly be fun :D
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mrsmadhatter271 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Love how it ended! Happy endings, right? ;)
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's whatever you want the ending to be~ Though I typically right tragic endings.
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pokemon7777 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
oh may GAWSH
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll take it that you liked the story?
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pokemon7777 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
yes
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YaoiCupcakeluver Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, I'm glad you did~
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pokemon7777 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
mhf
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